Summer LovinYou were on a perfect date with your totes KAWAII DESU YO~!!!11!! boyfriend/soul mate/hubby/fuck buddy/oh-my-God-why-can't-he-be-in-character boyfriend the kickass hero AMURICA! He looked at you and bat those eyelashes women would kill for. "Hey baby, wanna get a little wet right now?"
Oh, God, I'm not used to make a critique like this, because I'm ashamed to get an "asskisser" label... But I will anyway, because, I have no words to describe such a masterpiece... It's touching... I could feel what the characters are feeling... It's pretty deep... I cried. It even reminded me of when I was with my boyfriend when I was 8 and he grabbed my cunt and... oh, that was so awesome
I also ate his dick while I ejaculated. Yum yum.
It made me masturbate. This text is going to be my fapping material for now on.
By the way, the grammar is perfect! I have so much to lean with you... ;_;